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India 100 years from now. Good read. Multiple story lines interweaving/intersecting. Some predictable, some not. Two really good sentences. All in all, I give it a solid 7out of 10 Frightened Sherpas.
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I'll bite. What are the two really great sentences?
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Dammit, I already lent it out and I don't want to "lame-afy" the good prose with my bad, half-remembered versions. I did dog-ear the pages, though, so when it comes back I'll share. It will be interesting to see how much context had to do with the impact of the prose.
In the Tudor Period, Fencing Masters were classified in the Vagrancy Laws along with Actors, Gypsys, Vagabonds, Sturdy Rogues, and the owners of performing bears.