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Titanium White by CF
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Come, Mongoose, I want to play was a really fun read. I loved the atmosphere of it and the way it moved the story along. At a point, it had a meta vibe, and overall, it went a lot of fun places. 

I think I spotted a typo - one instance of Natasha dropped a consonant, the t I think. I went back to look for it and couldn’t find it so maybe it was my mind that dropped that letter.
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Titanium White by CF - by thatguy - 10-06-2023, 09:58 PM
RE: Titanium White by CF - by Drunk Monk - 10-06-2023, 11:41 PM
RE: Titanium White by CF - by Drunk Monk - 10-22-2023, 10:25 PM
RE: Titanium White by CF - by Drunk Monk - 10-28-2023, 12:10 AM
RE: Titanium White by CF - by Drunk Monk - 01-09-2024, 08:19 PM
RE: Titanium White by CF - by Drunk Monk - 01-12-2024, 01:15 PM

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