10-28-2023, 12:10 AM
Come, Mongoose, I want to play was a really fun read. I loved the atmosphere of it and the way it moved the story along. At a point, it had a meta vibe, and overall, it went a lot of fun places.
I think I spotted a typo - one instance of Natasha dropped a consonant, the t I think. I went back to look for it and couldn’t find it so maybe it was my mind that dropped that letter.
I think I spotted a typo - one instance of Natasha dropped a consonant, the t I think. I went back to look for it and couldn’t find it so maybe it was my mind that dropped that letter.
Shadow boxing the apocalypse

