06-21-2021, 11:06 PM
Enjoyable. I liked how you doled out sci-fi-jargon that worked well. The words, although made up, made sense. I also liked the dialog dynamics in the Deceptiod and Kabita in the first act (which felt a little like Spock v Norman), and then Kabita and Demitri in the second (which reminded me of a few tattoo discussions I've had with friends). Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
Shadow boxing the apocalypse

