11-12-2012, 05:45 PM
...But then I don't care for looking at blueprints either. Not when I can just go into the building and admire the architecture. So forgive me if I sound overly critical. I just don't care to read screenplays. If you really wanted to bug me, you'd get Stathan and Paltrow to read your screenplay to me....actually I take that back. I might enjoy that...especially if you could work in a swordfight.
I totally missed the name game you were playing. Perhaps it would work better if you used the real Chinese names for Warner and Laemle, although I didn't even know what Laemle was until now. Maybe that was a tad too obscure for me to appreciate.
I should also say that I found the dialog between the trainer and the trainee on qigong very amusing. At first, I thought it was going to be preachy, but I liked where it went in the end and it served as some good peripheral character development.
And of course, I'll read your stuff. Lord knows you read enough of mine and I write a lot of crap. Heck, isn't that what DOOM is about? Iron sharpeneth iron... ;-)
I totally missed the name game you were playing. Perhaps it would work better if you used the real Chinese names for Warner and Laemle, although I didn't even know what Laemle was until now. Maybe that was a tad too obscure for me to appreciate.
I should also say that I found the dialog between the trainer and the trainee on qigong very amusing. At first, I thought it was going to be preachy, but I liked where it went in the end and it served as some good peripheral character development.
And of course, I'll read your stuff. Lord knows you read enough of mine and I write a lot of crap. Heck, isn't that what DOOM is about? Iron sharpeneth iron... ;-)
Shadow boxing the apocalypse