Stro

[Drunk Monk]

DM, you know you aren't in the movie, right?

Okay, honestly, I'm not sure if Stro's screaming face as an inset quite works.  Part of me thinks it does.  Another part finds it distracting.  It reminds me of several designs our senior graphic artist put out over the years.  It's attention grabbing but distractingly so. 

And I do think there needs to be more swords.  Seriously, that's not me just being me.  No one outside the fencing world will recognize Stro's face so that's not a sell point.  Commoners will recognize swords and medals.  Don't make them work for it because they won't.  You've got to hit them with the obvious.